Hello, I’d really appreciate it if you could take a few moments to check out my story. The first few chapters are pretty short, so if you have around ten minutes, I’d love to hear your thoughts on however far you get. Even knowing where you lose interest is helpful.
Any feedback is welcome, but if you’re looking for specifics, here are a few areas I’m especially curious about:
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Any feedback is welcome, but if you’re looking for specifics, here are a few areas I’m especially curious about:
- Characterization
- Show vs. tell
- Worldbuilding
- Whether side characters feel flat or like real people
- What (if anything) draws you in
In The Seals Shadow
Liriel was raised to be the perfect daughter of a noble house: polished, obedient, and loyal to the traditions that kept her family in power. But when the ancient ritual she was meant to uphold collapses, everything she was taught to believe starts to fall apart, and her family’s...
