Gathering reviews and Feedback (Cultivation + LitRPG)[Please ignore this. I got double threads and dont know how to remove one of them]

[HydraScribe_1]

Im writing a cultivation novel with a system. Can someone give me some feedback on it? I have written upto chapter 97 but publicly only posted upto 21 as of yet. Need some feedback on it as so far, and as a new author, im walking in the dark lmao
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