Feedback on Landing Page?

[DismaiNaim]

Good morning,

Can I please get some feedback on my landing page, https://www.scribblehub.com/series/967246/a-place-to-bloom/

The cover. The blurb, anything else that compels or detracts you from wanting to check out the story?

 

[Juia_Darkcrest]

"After hope, tragedy, love, mystery, and betrayal, the monster in the mirror faces a chance to reshape an empire."

I see you were going for a play on words here but 'faces a chance' while technically correct, sounds awkward. You could consider rewording the whole thing or leave it.

The whole synopsis is nice in the fact that it is short and sweet. You could spare another paragraph or two to expand on the premise of your webnovel though.

It is a nice enough cover, though is fairly bland at first glance. It wont give you the 'maximum' impact a girl on the cover would, but it is classier, and simple enough that you can see at a glance what it is.

Overall, there is nothing particularly wrong with it. It doesnt jump out at me though.