Feedback for my story??? Needing readers!

Bella_Trixie

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Hi everyone! I've posted four chapters so far and will be uploading another chapter tomorrow.
It's a light novel so it's not written in the same style as a typical novel, instead it's much more loose and freeform.
Just wanting to get some criticisms and what not.
 
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