I need some reactions and opinions for my upcoming story, Aerolite Man. It's an isekai about a guy who loses his entire family, and makes it his mission to reunite with them in the world he's sent to.
Very distressing opening and some touchy iconography, for those concerned.
Heck, I'd also like some feedback on the latter, specifically. I need to know if literally portraying Hitler (though not directly addressing him) can even go on the site before I post it? I'm worried about it offending readers, so let me know if that part reads ok.
My main concern is whether or not the main character is boring. This is my first time writing an isekai idea that didn't immediately lose my interest, so it would be nice to gauge reactions and stuff before I think about posting it.
Here's the first three chapters
Very distressing opening and some touchy iconography, for those concerned.
Heck, I'd also like some feedback on the latter, specifically. I need to know if literally portraying Hitler (though not directly addressing him) can even go on the site before I post it? I'm worried about it offending readers, so let me know if that part reads ok.
My main concern is whether or not the main character is boring. This is my first time writing an isekai idea that didn't immediately lose my interest, so it would be nice to gauge reactions and stuff before I think about posting it.
Here's the first three chapters
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