Do You Enjoy Vampire Stories? Looking for Feedback on My Web Novel! ?

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Hey everyone! I’ve been working on a vampire web novel called Club Dusk, and I’d love to hear what people think of it so far. It’s a passion project that I’ve been developing for years, and I finally started posting it!

The story is set in the fictional Averon City, where supernatural activity revolves around Club Dusk—an underground club that has historically been a feeding ground for vampires. My vampires have their own unique rules:
? They aren’t allowed to kill—it’s a strict rule.
? They must feed every three days to survive.
? They can eat human food and drink (but it doesn’t sustain them).
? Each vampire has different abilities depending on their clan.
? The sun doesn’t burn them, but a wooden stake to the heart? That’ll do the job.

I have six chapters up so far, and I’d love to hear any thoughts—good, bad, or anywhere in between! If you enjoy vampire stories with mystery, romance, and supernatural drama, maybe you’ll like it. No pressure, of course, but I’d really appreciate any feedback.

Here is a link to my book: Club Dusk
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Do you still enjoy vampire stories? What kind of vampire tropes do you love or hate? Let’s chat!
 
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