Tsukuyo
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I have been writing an Isekai novel which is Dark Fantasy and I thought I need some feedback and opinions.
Specific Feedback Needed:
Tone: Does the "Dark Fantasy" atmosphere feel consistent, or are there scenes that feel too light?
Mystery: Is the mystery hook intriguing enough to keep you reading past Chapter 1?
Psychological Depth: Does the protagonist’s internal struggle feel realistic or earned?
Isekai Elements: How do you feel about the transition? Does it feel unique compared to standard Isekai?
Link:Here my novel
Specific Feedback Needed:
Tone: Does the "Dark Fantasy" atmosphere feel consistent, or are there scenes that feel too light?
Mystery: Is the mystery hook intriguing enough to keep you reading past Chapter 1?
Psychological Depth: Does the protagonist’s internal struggle feel realistic or earned?
Isekai Elements: How do you feel about the transition? Does it feel unique compared to standard Isekai?
Link:Here my novel