Chapter 12 of The Unchosen One is finished. Now the spicy stuff begins.

[Deleted member 29081]

I'm so thankful for all the people who stuck with my story thus far. Chapter 12 marks the end of the "Childhood" arc. From here on, there's going to be a lot more drama and action. Our protagonist will get to see the dark underbelly of his world for himself, and I'm looking forward to exploring it.

I hope I haven't spoiled the latest chapter with all these words. I do implore you to read it if you're interested.

And please, leave any feedback in the comments, reviews, or this thread. All criticism and feedback are highly appreciated.

 

[Deleted member 29316]

Chapter 12 is just....damn...

F******CCCCCKKKK...the betrayal...I could relate to it.

(Don't mind me, it's a great chapter.)

I need to punch something.

 

[MasterHiatus]

...Based on Hans' review, it seems I need to read this. I love betrayals. All those traitors...I like burning them to hell