Sylverius
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So this is the first time my Novel finally reached the important part of the story. But, although I just published it, I needed people's opinions on my work so that I would know whether to try and improve the fight scenes a lot more or not. I was kept getting side-tracked because of how bad my writing style was. Truth be told, it's actually my Nth rework (I don't really remember anymore. All I know is that this is the final one) on my novel and I wanted to see how people felt about it, that's why I need opinions really.
If you're gonna read it, then please read Chapter 0 first to get an idea of how the world works, its common story/legend, about how its history was, and the class systems. If you want to know about the appearances of the main cast, then please read the bonus chapter. Sadly, I could only describe in words since I suck at art HAHAHA
www.scribblehub.com
Read the first chapter already to be very confused at what or who or where HAHAHA
Also, yes. I have revised it after getting some feedbacks, this is basically a lot more different now, but the direction of the story shall remain the same.
If you're gonna read it, then please read Chapter 0 first to get an idea of how the world works, its common story/legend, about how its history was, and the class systems. If you want to know about the appearances of the main cast, then please read the bonus chapter. Sadly, I could only describe in words since I suck at art HAHAHA
King: The Silver King’s echo - Bonus chapter | Scribble Hub
Read the first chapter already to be very confused at what or who or where HAHAHA
Also, yes. I have revised it after getting some feedbacks, this is basically a lot more different now, but the direction of the story shall remain the same.
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