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You could actually make that an internal conflict within the Empire... that some splinter groups or cults actually interpret the concept of "In Death There Is Glory" to mean all forms of death, not just the righteous path of self sacrifice for others. You could have an epidemic of hopeless...

i just dropped mine as CHAPTER 0, explained in the description that it works as a prologue for those interested in a longer build up, but is essentially optional... doing it as an "origins/intro arc" or just naming it "prologue" also work~

eh, i'll still reply... if you're saying that the demographics of the userbase of SH SPECIFICALLY are very reflective of you as the average reader here, not necessarily across all webnovel platforms or the LN readership as a whole, then that makes more sense. thanks again, whether you reply or not~

i really do appreciate having someone feedback as a "simple reader"... like i said, i'm from a more pretentious background, but that's not how i want to write. i do read LNs and enjoy them, it's nice to turn my brain off and not always be challenged, and i feel there's a way to write about a...

Drifters already did it and it was rad! https://myanimelist.net/anime/31339/Drifters

i will reply properly later, but i actually really appreciate your expanding on your points, especially the pro-wrestling comparison, i too am a mark~

thank you, that really does help... i'm always unsure about paragraph length. i've got this weird disconnect between what i read and how i am trying to write - philosophy crap like "the age of reason", but trying emulate light novels - so, my heart screams stream of consciousness walls of text...

currently seeking feedback on my ongoing realistic isekai, so if that's something you'd be interested in, then have at it~ if you're sticking to first chapter impressions then CHAPTER 0 is effectively the prologue, atmosphere setting/tension building stuff. CHAPTER 1 was meant to be more of the...

Please read as much as you want for reference, all critique welcome: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/555601/i-human/ I, Human! - or what it's really like to get isekai'd~ i have never asked for feedback before, so please feel free being brutal as fuck... i'd like to address a few stylistic...

like Aaqil says, it entirely depends on the vigilante... they could be the lone paragon of truth and justice in a horrible corrupt and brutal police state, the holy paladin or revolutionary underdog. they could be a total fucking psychopath that just does the job as an excuse to kill people, no...