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Power levels are crap. From my own experience writing...I had to give up saying such as such has this power level. Since my story is geared towards game logic, I simply cheated by having health bars instead. It's really too contradictory to use power levels anymore...

Even tsunderes need love in this newest chapter. What awaits these two in the future? https://www.scribblehub.com/read/344763-db--taming-the-tsundere-shortie/chapter/356342/

true!

I think you may be right. I feel like a person written review would be better than the rating system.

Sure! Will do.

God for yo Good for you! And no, I like smut.

Yes, you would likely need a working knowledge of both dragon ball as well as the video game XenoVerse 2 and Heroes, as well as Legends... I do try to explain some things that wouldn't be obvious but otherwise I assume the reader has knowledge about the show and games. Also you are so sweet...

Current work: Bōru ni negai, which is a dragon ball XenoVerse/legends mix fanfic. Here's the synopsis: An abused Otaku Tsundere gets her wish granted and starts her new easygoing Academy life. Lewds happen, and she's forced into a relationship with a lilac haired devi! This isn't the isekai...

Thanks for the info. Didn't mean to come off as whiny! I was just hoping someone would read it and give feedback. Also I agree. Always room for improvement. I'll look for those threads; new here and to light novels in general.

Right at this second the end goal would be to have someone obsessed over what I write, hell maybe become a toxic fan. That's when I know I've done it. I'll have written something that has wedged into the readers reality. That's about as dark and depraved as it gets for me

Awesome! Thanks for letting me know. Makes me feel a bit better heh. Man, people can be cruel in unusual ways.

Thanks for the info! I didn't realize that would be a big issue but I'm glad I know now. It irked me to not know why I would get a 1 star without any explanation or comment. But I suppose that's my writer side coming out, which would prompt me to say why I gave such a low rating. Anyways thanks...

So I received a 1 star and worried I've written something unappealing. Well, I had a few good ratings and I'm just wanting to make sure it's not a writing issue and just a "don't like this" problem Bear in mind this is my first light novel although I have written lots before. Also I'm a female...