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  1. MoMoKushBear

    I will read your story and give reviews. (I am OatMush's disciple).

    Hi I have a story I would like some feedback on please ?. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/164860/wandering-the-world/
  2. MoMoKushBear

    The Chicken Pen (Feedback Thread)

    ???? I literally pay for grammarly where I write the story on their app to make sure there are no spelling and grammar errors. If you didn't like the story or it's not your thing you could have just said that. No need to insult someone and try to hide it as advice. But I guess thanks for your...
  3. MoMoKushBear

    Quacky's synopsis review

    Hey there I would love some feedback on my synopsis. Here's my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/164860/wandering-the-world/
  4. MoMoKushBear

    The Chicken Pen (Feedback Thread)

    Oh holy and merciful chick I offer you my story. I hope it is to your liking. ? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/164860/wandering-the-world/
  5. MoMoKushBear

    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    Thank you a lot for the feedback. You had very nice words and I'm glad even though it's not your type of story you still like it. I'm still writing on it and plan to continue. I see what you are saying about the wife and will try to work on it. Thanks very much for doing these reviews and hope...
  6. MoMoKushBear

    Recommendations need a recommendation for a revenge novel.

    Wandering The World is a revenge novel if you wanna check ot out.
  7. MoMoKushBear

    Recommendations Physical violence

    Idk if you are looking for something more fantasy or magic based, but I am writing a story with a lot of Hand to Hand combat in it. It has Sci-fi elements but it's more of a grounded story. It's called Wandering The World if you wanna check it out. I have 17 chapters so far and am still writing...
  8. MoMoKushBear

    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    Hey umm if you are still doing reviews I was hoping to maybe throw my story in the mix. It's called Wandering The World.
  9. MoMoKushBear

    Need feedback or just a review?

    If you are still doing reviews. Here's my novel. It's an action/adventure novel. A public honest review is good with me. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/164860/wandering-the-world/ The year is 2028 it's been 9 years since the Great War that saw most of the world nuked. A world government...
  10. MoMoKushBear

    Offering reviews!

    If you are still doing reviews. Here's my novel. It's an action/adventure novel. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/164860/wandering-the-world/ The year is 2028 it's been 9 years since the Great War that saw most of the world nuked. A world government has now been set up to prevent anymore...
  11. MoMoKushBear

    Free Reviews: Since I want some tick of inspiration.

    If you are still doing reviews. Here's my novel. It's an action/adventure novel. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/164860/wandering-the-world/ The year is 2028 it's been 9 years since the Great War that saw most of the world nuked. A world government has now been set up to prevent anymore...
  12. MoMoKushBear

    Share your stories

    Here's my novel. It's an action/adventure novel. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/164860/wandering-the-world/ The year is 2028 it's been 9 years since the Great War that saw most of the world nuked. A world government has now been set up to prevent anymore wars. After a tragic event Stan is...
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