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Thanks for the detailed feedback! I was at work then went drinking after (I'm in Japan right now so it's almost midnight), so I only found time to reply now. I'm glad you like my MC so far, and for reading the whole arc. As you noticed, there's a flow I'm going for: intro -> warm moment -> bad...

Touma if he causes the girls to not like him back, so the opposite of Katsuragi actually.

Hi everyone, regular NPC Villager A here, and I'm seeking feedback on my romcom novel attempt. Link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2245921/barrys-bad-luck/ Feedback type: How was the pacing? Was it easy to read? And how is my main character as the narrator, since almost the entire story...

Gonna throw mine too. Link: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2245921/barrys-bad-luck/ For some context: This is a romcom that spans middle school until high school The story is divided into arcs, which I just conveniently name after the girls features, so the first 3 chapters I posted...

Greetings, oh esteemed reading and reviewing veteran. I happened upon your thread and thought I could perhaps gain some feedback on my humble romcom attempt. Right now I've posted the first of multiple story arcs, with each arc being 3-4 chapters in general and features a new girl and a new...