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Consistency. Some stories start strong, create a hook, but then end up fading into nothingness or become flat as an ironing board with nothing really happening.

I would also recommend my Black Fang story. The cast is not exactly small and most of them do get some real spotlight. And they are really a colorful bunch. So if you like a "girls with guns" dark urban action story, Black Fang may be something for you

I use it in many ways. 1. English is not my primary language, so I sometimes use it for grammar check 2. Some characters speak other languages too, so sometimes I use it to get an accurate translation. 3. To get some very specific informations. (technical, geographical or clinical for example)

My first story didn´t even start as a serious attempt. No plan, no nothing. I was rewatching some old anime series like the Gunslinger Girls and started goofing around creating alt characters. The characters then started to form their own world, pesronalities, skills, origin, everything. And...

My first story was done over a month ago. It has an ending. On one hand I was happy and felt fullfilled, on the other hand - is it really over? Is it done? Somehow I couldn´t let go. I started to work on some character visualisations, but even so, or because of that the Fangs are still squatting...

The smallest thing in my story is a simple phonecall in episode 3. David Williams, the father of the MC, Michelle, calls Trella. Trella suggests to tell Michelle the truth. If this wouldn´t happen, Michelle would never find out what Trella and her friends really are, they would never become...

GSC? Oh, yeah! Watched and even translated! I really love that one! Btw ep. 6 & 7 are out now I wouldn´t say it´s cruel. It´s just the way it it. And... stuck in the traditional novel mindset? I think I would say traditional anime mindset... And yes, I am oldschool, I realise that. And I´m a...

@Eldoria Thanks to your feedback. As the author I feel I need to provide a comment myself. Please don't take it the wrong way, I'm not trying to criticise your criticism, I take your point, but there are a few reasons why the first episode - or rather the first two episodes are slow burn...

Not exactly, but the is some level of influence. Gunslinger Gilrs, Black Lagoon, Jormungand, Lycoreco

I have completed my very first story. The tone is similar to "Girls with guns" anime from 20 years ago era. It is a dark urban action drama. The story as such is done, I´ll be dropping 1-2 episodes here every day. So, please check out Black Fangand tell me what you think. Thanks...

Hi, here is something I hope you like: a Girls with guns style urban action drama Black Fang. I´ll be dropping 1-2 ep every day. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2199099/black-fang/

Some episode titles came naturally and pretty quick, they either reflect a key moment or the general topic of the episode, but I try to be as figurative as possible, sometimes turning things on its head. For example: Episode 5: Enter Maya - Maya is the centerpoint of the episode, makes sence but...