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  1. Fondofwisdom

    Feedback and/or discussion would be wonderful.

    mmm that is probably a good idea, It'll depend a lot of other stuff going on but I'll try to be at least a little more consistent.
  2. Fondofwisdom

    Feedback and/or discussion would be wonderful.

    mmm I was worried that might be the case, its one of those 'life's busy' sort of things, I like writing but can only commit so much time to it next to other things, especially when other things bring money in. Oh also thank you
  3. Fondofwisdom

    Feedback and/or discussion would be wonderful.

    mmm i see, at some point I'll have to go back through and edit a lot of the earlier stuff, for now I will keep that in mind for what comes next Now the swap to first person is meant to be a touch jarring, but does the first person read properly? I want the story to be firmly inside his head...
  4. Fondofwisdom

    Feedback and/or discussion would be wonderful.

    Editing is something i struggle a lot with, I see so many ways people write and I tend to fall back on what I remember from school with paragraphing, or what was 'proper'. I thought dialog had to go at the end or middle more often to help readers keep track of who's talking. Later chapters...
  5. Fondofwisdom

    Craving feedback vs. Staying motivated

    A big part of why I started this story was to do something similar, but I cant pretend that discussion and feedback don't fuel me greatly.
  6. Fondofwisdom

    Craving feedback vs. Staying motivated

    I think that's a good point, but I don't necessarily think I am an average reader, not that I have a higher bar of quality but more that I naturally find I don't align with many people, I notice weird stuff or pick up odd patterns and I have to try and write for everyone, plus I have context for...
  7. Fondofwisdom

    Feedback and/or discussion would be wonderful.

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1981933/a-yankii-odyssey-the-ironcrown-compact/ So I have issues with a lot of what Isekai offers today. So I thought I might as well try my hand at it instead of just complaining. But i haven't written stories since highschool and I have no idea if the way i...
  8. Fondofwisdom

    Craving feedback vs. Staying motivated

    It's just the picture i use for everything, based on a photo of my old dog. love your well dressed orc btw. oh for real? like i just toss the link there? I haven't scrounged around in forums in probably 10 years and i popped in on a whim. So proper etiquette with this stuff is a little lost to me.
  9. Fondofwisdom

    Craving feedback vs. Staying motivated

    I'd say it's a hobby with room to grow, that growth thrives on attention and demand not from me but from others since hobbies don't pay bills. I'm stuck in the space of: writing well is a pain in the ass, especially if no one reads or can tell me if I'm doing it right in the first place. Not...
  10. Fondofwisdom

    Craving feedback vs. Staying motivated

    That's the sort of confidence I hope to have at some point, I guess i get too wrapped up in if what i make is good, but if I'm writing for others good becomes so subjective and intangible. Writing is decently fun, I get bogged down in the idea that it's not good enough to just write what I'm...
  11. Fondofwisdom

    Craving feedback vs. Staying motivated

    I struggle to lock in for writing, i try and get a chapter every week or two even if they aren't long, mostly because i thrive on feedback. Uploading more would probably get more eyes but its difficult to push for it. Do i need to just separate myself from outside opinion and write for me even...
  12. Fondofwisdom

    Working on: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1981933/a-yankii-odyssey-the-ironcrown-compact/

    Working on: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1981933/a-yankii-odyssey-the-ironcrown-compact/
  13. Fondofwisdom

    Writing anyone ever get burnt out from planning?

    I get where your coming from, I like planning the background of what I'm writing a lot but it becomes hard when all those pieces are on the board for the actual story.
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