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AI is going to pretty insane in just a few years, jussayin

Chapter 1: House Skogerrak His hand gripped the handle of the arming sword as tightly as if letting go meant falling off of the face of the earth. The scouts hadn't heard a sound, not a bird, nothing. “Means a predator is nearby,” Captain Ragnall had said – one of the last things he'd said...

I was awoken at 3 AM last night by a squad of raccoons getting into my trash. I had to work that day, so I never got back to sleep lol

I truly envy people who can effectively write romance and smut. I guess its just the lack of experience with that in my own life that makes me a bit stunted in that genre.

Genius. Copyright this immediately and start a kickstarter ASAP. I want to see this.

Career politicians are a necessary evil unfortunately. I've honestly enjoyed the Trump administrations so far, despite having MANY complaints, but the simple fact is that we should probably opt in favor of career politicians in favor of businessmen, because the fundamental problem with an...

This. Shorter poleaxe for fighting.

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This is still just a rough draft but I took some of the criticisms into consideration and rearranged the chapters and organized them by faction and character, while adding some more back story. If there still isn't enough character development please let me know in a timely fashion (I do plan on...

Do you think taking a similar chapter system to Game of Thrones would help? (I.E. Soren I, Soren II, Hans III, Michael I, etc.) Seems like having big long chapters is impacting the pacing, and I should really have about 5 or 6 shorter chapters EDIT: And in those chapters they could of course be...

Appreciate the constructive criticism on my initial attempt, here's what I've got after starting over and taking those criticisms into account. Chapter 1: An Enemy Returns His hand gripped the handle of the arming sword as tightly as if letting go meant falling off of the face of...

This gives me some reassurance considering my fiction is very international and somewhat globalist in its expanse. Anyway, here is my updated Prologue: His hand gripped the handle of the arming sword as tightly as if letting go meant falling off of the face of the earth. The...

I'm wondering if I should prioritize that if I'm wanting to capture non-omniscient 3rd person readers such as yourself?

Lol yeah I'm deleting and rewriting as I go. I might just delete all of this and start over from scratch. More interested in character building (I have updated the character roster btw)

Here's the text: It has been over one thousand and one hundred years since the Ancient Elysian Empire fragmented into a thousand pieces, leaving behind a degenerate waste bathed in blood and destitute peasant masses in its wake. An era of feudalism had wrenched its talons across the...

The Hyxyxya were a legion of trillions-strong, enveloping entire worlds and star systems. The Imperium had been a mere blip in the grand scheme of things - only around 6,000 years old - but still, the humans were an intimidating species. They had managed to split the atom, and thus create...

Probably my favorite rap song of all time: