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  1. Bayleyrockstar

    Finally completed 10 chapters.

    Great, now you just need the crippling self-doubt that everyone who ever liked your writing secretly hates it, The self loathing that you ever wrote something so terrible now that you know better, and the over active imagination that demands you work on your new idea, but you can't, because time...
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    As a reader, what is your attention span tolerance for the minimum and maximum number of sentences in a paragraph?

    As someone who has forced themselves to attempt to read those, on a phone no less, I can say they basically put a paragraph of information in separate lines, so it's an absolute nightmare to know where a thought begins or ends unless someone starts speaking. Onto length. I may be a bad sample...
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    Alright. I've enjoyed reading the backlog. Time to throw my hand in. It seems like it'll be entertaining and educational. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2233667/i-just-want-to-see-you-turn-into-an-immortal/
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    How many levels of administrative division should an interstellar nation have?

    So administrative levels are based on the type of governance, but not all governance is equal, even among monarchies. Even less so when you start getting into civilization tiers. Any galactic civ with direct control over sub administrations requires two things. The ability to communicate with...
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    Villainous

    It's longer than six episodes. It originally was picked up by Cartoon Network for about 10 1-minute shorts, which were what was on YouTube. It's basically a passion project of an animator. And they're now working on a spin-off. As for stopping you, you're an adult (probably), and can make your...
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    Writing Outlining: How Do?

    Depends. For fiction, you usually want to keep your outline loose. In fact, your outline might look more like a glossary than an actual outline. There's generally only 3 items a fiction outline needs. - Who are the primary Characters? The characters who will play the biggest part in your novel...
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    looking for help from Japan

    Hey Leslie, not from Japan, but as someone who visited as a tourist before. (not specifically the Nagano prefecture.) I can suggest where you should start looking for things that would differ between their daily lives. First of all, Japan has a much different eating etiquette from British...
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    Paranormal experiences and story

    All my life. But there are a few moments that stand out as obviously paranormal. I've been to several mediums in my youth, who all claim I'm some sort of 'natural psychic' if you believe in that. Because my parents got tired of me complaining about these experiences. I'm still skeptical about...
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    The Art of Creative Insults: A Thread

    "You're so old-fashioned, you drive everyone to drink!" was one that tickled me enough to remember it. "I envy those who don't know you." and my favorite. "With you in the gene pool, I need to hire a lifeguard."
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    Writing, kindness, and new chapters that surprised me

    Hey Leslie. Proper Kudos to the new chapter. Not my cup of tea, but any book written with the heart is a book worth existing. Despite any criticism I might give it. I'm in the same boat. Been writing fiction most of my life, but today I decided to start making something of a proper career out of...
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