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I have to agree with the short consensus. I worry you're providing way too much Wikipedia and not enough story. At this rate, we'd need a scoresheet to keep track. Be ambitious if you must but not too complex. Simplify things. You've got a great style though. Honestly, this fits the dimestore...

A deer with no penis: D'oh! 😁

Did you know that if you were born in '45, 33 years later, you'd be 78? That's a record! 😁

Is it odd that I didn't understand this one? Please explain. *^^*

One day,, Professor X was reviewing the application of a young girl who wanted to attend Xavier's School for Gifted Youngsters. As they spoke, the Professor asked, "Alright, so what exactly is your superpower?" The girl glanced up at a ceiling fan a few feet above them and then pointed. "I can...

I honestly didn't like the on-board editor they had for submissions. Maybe it's changed since I was there a few years ago, but I still think they SHOULD focus on comics.

You can use the same tactic for a story, I imagine. I'm not just not quite sure how that would go.

Of course not. No one should ever feel like that, because if they did, they don't improve or expand their horizons, or challenge their skills. You shouldn't like everything you write, and you shouldn't like writing everything you write.

I'm sorry. I honestly couldn't get past the Prologue. Numerous instances of "why are you using this word", which then makes me wonder if this is a translation through AI, and if so, it's not a very good one, I'm afraid. Try not to use words you really shouldn't use. It just kills your story. 😊...

I started a book on Tapas and didn't really see much of a response. It's really all about the comics there. *^^*

Really, peanut butter is a lot more versatile than folks think. You can do just about everything with it. One of my specialties is a peanut butter and jelly omelette. :love: But yours sounds really good too. I might have to try an omelette with all of that.

I'm crazy for peanut butter and bologna sandwiches. 😁

"Belle", quite possibly one of the most emotional and relatable anime moves I've ever seen. A young girl tries out an internet sensation simulation where millions of users band together to escape reality and feed into the ego of internet stardom. Relatable in how the internet is today - when...

Oh! Right. Um, yeah, "Chicken Little". It works because it's an old-time children's fairy tale we all grew up with, and deserved a shot at production.

Great choice. Mine too. "Wish" had no business being created. Someone who said "make a wish" was NOT talking about this movie.

We were nearly struck by a meteor this morning. Happy St. Patty's Day! 😁 :alien:

I think "Wish" deserved an explanation. It felt to me like Di$ney decided to cram a bunch of leftover animation film ideas into one film and try to sell it. It didn't. It may have been the worst concept I ever saw.