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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    Like with my previous story, I originally posted this stuff on SpaceBattles and QuestionableQuesting. Given how QQ is an NSFW forum I'll post the SFW link to SB: https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/adam-smasher-with-large-tracts-of-land-cyberpunk-edgerunner.1228307/ On it, as you can see, I...
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    'ello, I'm back with a new story that I'm hoping to get roasted on. I've incorporated a lot of the criticism I received last time and I hope this one is better (it should be considering how low of a bar I set). https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1672032/adam-smasher-with-tits/
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    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    I'd like to join the queue as well https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1402472/you-are-being-saved-please-do-not-resist-wcscpwhen-day-breaks-start/
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    Okay, the logos, pathos, and ethos I can accept readily since when I started it, I didn't exactly think about those points when I wrote it. These three points you raised are definitely something I'd need to think about the next time I try to start a story rather than 'just do it' and 'follow a...
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    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    I'd like to join the queue https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1402472/you-are-being-saved-please-do-not-resist-wcscpwhen-day-breaks-start/glossary/
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1402472/you-are-being-saved-please-do-not-resist-wcscpwhen-day-breaks-start/ I'd like some feedback on this story of mine. I'm doing a daily release of (~3k word average per chapter) so every day at 7 AM Eastern Standard Time there'll be a new chapter. Could...
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