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So thank you for such a great take on my chapter and all your questions are really good pointers too. That will all be explained in future chapters on why he kidnapped them, why is he not killing them, and if you notice there is no perspective from his side truly? Pacing wise thank you for...

Salutations to the citizens of this world. I require your services... begrudgingly, my services are not well received in my world; thus, I have looked for new outlets to gather views and found you. What I require is very simple. You, the recipient, shall partake in my subinorates creation, in...

This is the first chapter of my series, I would like criticism on how major errors I might have made, and your opinion on how well it is built. ( https://coda.grammarly.com/d/Urban-Valor-Chapter-1-rough-draft_ddhpLyQTrFu PDF file here as well ) PLEASE READ Haven't used scribble hub format, so...

No worries that has been completely redone! No such cliche or boring scene will happen at the beginning that would now be a disservice to my villain Also I have posted a new thread regarding chapter 1 on my introduction as well

Alright I have completely rewritten it thank you so much for the feedback that helped a lot on my hook and introduction and I’ve made a new thread regarding it if you would like to look

I made the first chapter of my story and want to know what you readers think of it. It is currently in production, but I want to share the introduction to see if it would hook you guys. I am open to constructivite criticsm. Chap[ter 1] "Let The Show Begin" [Light City] Sitting on the East...

Finished my introduction. This is only the intro, I need to write the combat tomorrow, never done it, so wish me luck. want to get your thoughts on it. (PS NOT heavily edited yet) [Chapter 1] "Let The Show Begin" [Light City] Sitting on the East Coast, the ultimate destination for Business...

Haha we had something like that for a bit can’t explain it though

I was talking with my mother this evening about my story I’m writing and wanting to create a villain title and she told me to use the “Strange Case of Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde” I never knew she had knowledge like this, she hates horror and everything I have no clue how she came to know this. And...

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Making the first chapter and made bullet points to start from there, and lead into the full text want to get opinions on how it looks so far. Introduction He starts in a dream climbing a hill to see.. something he is chasing someone who calls his name and tries to encourage him, he is...

lol it can certainly be read that way right now, I was thinking about adding his school day but since this is the intro I wasn’t sure about it. I absolutely need to flesh it out but I’m brainstorming it right now Okay thank you I wasn’t sure where to put it! I appreciate the help!

Making the first chapter and made bullet points to start from there, and lead into the full text want to get opinions on how it looks so far. Introduction He starts in a dream climbing a hill to see.. something he is chasing someone who calls his name and tries to encourage him, he is...

The 3rd story has been chosen! Thank you, everyone, for all the help with picking which one to start. I will work on the other stories as well on a later date. I will start working on the very first chapter and try to post it later this week! I hope I can get some more feedback then as well. ?‍♂️

I have built them all into their own separate world build one is a pure fantasy word then it’s 2 mmo Hmm I will try it out and see how it goes thank you! Thank you! I didn’t put too much detail into the world because I didn’t want to give everything away because if I shared more it out it...

For the third story he would only have one life after his possession before that though yes it would be video game revives

Wow that is some boxing combo read it love it, and completely agree with the pacing issue

Hi I am an avid reader of scribble-hub and want to write a story I have 3 in mind with stage 1 progression in all of them or general outline so to say but don’t know which one to start and was hoping to get some help on what would be more interesting to you guys? Story 1 sword and magic No...