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I have been writing for some time already but I decided to get some feedback on my first chapter which I recently reworked. The important part is whether you would keep reading the story after reading the first chapter and how I could improve the first chapter to make it easier for people to...

Hi everyone, I'm a new writer looking for some criticism. I wrote a fight scene between my main character and one of his enemies. Read these two chapters to get the idea: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/286360-the-children-of-the-divine-limit/chapter/299362/...