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An alchemist too good at his job. Whatever potion he brews, they show effects much greater than all other potions. He once brew a potion of cold resistance and fire resistance and drank both. Instead of protecting him from these elements, potions made it so, every atom in his body never gained...

Hello, I have recently been experimenting with a dark-fantasy litrpg and finally finished a decent draft for its first chapter, and I need feedback for it. If you have time to spare, I won't mind constructive or harsh criticism, or just small comments about it.

This has been a question eating my mind as of late. Should we embrace the BS in our books, if there is, or try to fix it? I started asking this while building the world of my current project. It had magic, superpowers, modern technology, knights wearing power armor while wielding magic swords...

I am currently working on a new project as if I don't have too much on my plate, and I am in desperate need of an outside critic because something about it is just not clicking with me. If you can help me, I would be very grateful.

Context: In the current story I am writing, mc and fmc are subjects from an experiment to create an artificially evolved human species called Angels. The world they live in already has super-powered people who gained their powers through natural evolution, but Angels are overloaded with the...

Hello, after taking a long break, I rewrote most of my soft sci-fi, Earth Invasion, novel and I need feedback. I have no viewer interactions, thus no idea if I am doing something wrong, which I probably am, so what is the problem? Maybe my writing, the title, the synopsis, perhaps the AI book...

I have no idea how. Here is the chapter link: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/518665-emperor-of-the-north/chapter/1079487/

While writing the new chapter of my book, I realized I made my character reveal a piece of information he shouldn't have. It's been more than a dozen chapters since, so what would be the most suitable way of retconning that? For context, my character revealed his source of powers, which cause...

So, I am currently working on a mini-fantasy series, and I want to use D20 to determine how well my characters would fare when they are escaping from a strong monster, or fighting against a bandit ambush while escorting a carriage etc. Would this system work, or inconsistency of dice make the...

Hello, I currently write a battle academy book, and I need feedback on the fight scene in Chapter 1: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/794596-generic-battle-academia/chapter/794618/ I want to know if you think the combat flow is smooth or has holes and if my descriptions are decent or bad...

Hello, I am writing a battle-academia/protect Earth from space monsters-type story. I have written several chapters focused on the main character and given details about him and how he entered the academy, but I need advice for introducing other team members. A small detail: Mc doesn't meet with...

Hello, I am looking for a story similar to the pacific rim with alien monsters invading Earth, but with the addition of super-powered individuals. If you have any recommendations, be it on this site, a hardcover novel, or yours, I will be glad to add them to my reading list.

So some time ago, I stopped my main series and began a rewrite because I felt something was wrong. But after two months of writing. I have some concerns. My writing got better, at least grammar-wise, but my story got boring, at least for me., I cannot feel the same excitement as before...

Not for a story, not for writing. I am just curious, since both the color green and red is used (mostly red) for healing potions, but between two, which one you prefer.

I am not sure if here is the supposed part for this question but what is that, why some of my views are coming from out of no where.

Hello everyone and anyone, a fellow writer here. I want to write a Battle Academy novel, but I tried before and failed, like oh my God, I don't even want to remember it. Then I decided that I should look for guides and tips about writing one, but as you can guess, that didn't work. I...

Hello dear writers and readers, I have a question in my mind. How can I make gunpowder weapons not too powerful in a medieval setting without completely butchering the immersion? And I am not talking about the first musket rifles that took so long between shoots enemy can make itself an omelet...

For me, one of the most exciting parts of a story (if it isn't a no combat book) is weapons. Especially the weapons that I can consider as most or one of the most powerful ones. Because of that, I want to learn what my fellow writers created as their ultimate weapons. (If you don't write or...

What if we could add a small icon at the end of sentences we want, and when the reader clicks that icon, he/she can hear the sound effect added by the author. For example: Arthur shouted with rage. "It is over. You cannot escape from me this time." Arthur pointed a weapon towards the masked...

In my story, Mc tamed a wyvern after a fight, but as I wanted to give a name to the wyvern, I remembered that I suck at giving pet names. For extra detail: Wyvern's scales are a mix of dark green and brown, and he is not very big (around five meters from head to tail.) Wyvern is dumber than a...