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Asking for feedback for this novel: First thoughts, any jarring aspects? An honest review would be fine too. If you want to swap reviews, we could. Forge Fate [LitRpg]

I need some grease to get the ball rolling. Let's do advanced reviews (You can spice it up, or use the conventional RR format). I'll write it up and post it on the thread first, tell me if you want me to put it up on your story. Please do a review on: Story : Regarding a Returning King's Magic...

Working on writing something new, hope to reach out and get a few more impressions. Regarding a Returning King's Magic - Link to Google Docs Genre: Fantasy Setting: Modern Medieval Word Count: 4,300 Summary: The One-Armed King had spent over ten years fighting within the Spirit Domain. He...

I started with learning about digital art last year, the same time I started writing. It's been a year and I finally got to buy a drawing pad! I'll start with the ones I drew first. (Drawn with a mouse on Krita) Setting of Erden Ye Oldest BookCover Nifyr (Monster in my series) Ye...

If you're the guy on discord I just talked to... I mean—I just probably have the same profile picture and name. It wasn't me, I swear. On some rare occasions, I found myself suddenly having to sell myself as a writer. I'm pretty sure the proceedings went less than satisfactory. I've gone...

It's been a while since I last asked. Anyone there with the energy to give feedback? Or a review? Feel free to even leave comments. I would gladly appreciate it. Even if it makes me— Link to my story in signature.

So I had a bout of severe vertigo recently and experienced this fever dream. I thought— this could do for a start of a story, but I'm currently already writing one. If anyone wants to take inspiration from this, you're more than welcome to. It starts like this... Some other stuff happened...

Damn backache. Spending longer, and longer hours on a chair. I even use a gaming chair with lumbar support and everything. Still, the inevitable came. I wonder, is it just cause I'm getting unyounger?

When you spill the emotions of your character onto yourself, do you ever find it hard to write? Interpret the emotion any way you wish, mine specifically is of my character's depression.

Have you guys ever tried posting 2 of the same titles together on this site? Where one is the original and the second is in a rewritten form? In my case, for example, I started Erden with no knowledge and experience with writing. I'm planning to do rewrites for it, and have started. Is it...

Yes. It's anime. Not the 3d game animation that Tencent is known for. This thread will be me giving a review(rant cause I'm drunk) about it. Damn. I love the art. The voice actors did good. Pacing? Decent, I guess. Not jarring like most chinese animation. At least, not until the Northern vs...

A little over 1200 words. I plan on maybe doing some rewrites on Land of Erden. Below being the first chapter, does it keep your interest till the end? D'you think it could work? I humbly ask for a bit of criticism. - Age Ten – Urie Loeth - —It's tomorrow. Tomorrow. Finally, it's...

When you get these comments that shower you with praise but you know that it will eventually lead to-- You should publish this on n****st*r, or you should join this contest, and whatnot. Would you just ignore spam like this? Being a self-proclaimed good-natured person, I still reply to them...

How about a random recommendation reel? Is it a good idea? Hoping to give small authors like me an additional chance of discoverability. Because other than shameless self-promotion and update days, we don't get much exposure. (Works the same with already well-known works but they already have an...

Do you switch up your genres according to the mood of your writing? Or do you just blast away your favorite songs? Just honest curiosity.

I'm already past the 20k word count for my novel and so far, I haven't received much feedback. I'm thankful for the readers continuing to read as they give me more motivation, but the lack of feedback really gives me anxiety. Here is the link to my novel...