Hello, I tried to rewrite my Prologue for my web-novel : Battle Mage.
Please give me your thought about the content of my prologue. Any kind of feedback is welcomed.
Link : Prologue
I try to write my own story, the title will be "Battle Mage".
Please give me your feedback about this prologue I made, maybe about the story idea, or the grammar or perhaps the prose.
Before that, i'll drop my synopsis here.
And here's the Prologue.