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Hi, I need your opinion about this emotional scene I made. Can you capture the emotion? Or is it too flat? Or maybe it's too fast? The context : Zarev was being tricked by his sister, Clarice. From chapter before, he asked Clarice to deliver Ramond to his biological father. But he found out...

So when i uploaded a chapter today, and checked the dashboard, I realized something. I forgot upload The Prologue!!!! I had similar mistake when I was uploading my first writing here. And when I uploaded the prologue mid story, and re-arrange the chapters, i got shadowbanned. Do you guys have...

Hi! I need you guys opinion regarding the sequence i made for 'Mini-Boss' fight. Is it too long? Or maybe too short for Mini-Boss fight? Or is it enough? Here's the action scene :

So, I just know this term called 'Foreshadowing', because one of the reader DM me, and mention about this. She said that I dropped several foreshadowing across 20 chapters just to 'make it sense' later. She told me that "Foreshadowing is good, but you should not drag it too long. I must re-read...

So, i tried to improve my writing by improving my Deep POV approach. Since my story already reaching the main Psychological Thriller (Dark-side arc). There's 2 chapters that using Deep POV. Please give me your critique and suggestion about my writing. Little context about what happen so far ...

Hi, I tried to create art work for my future chapter. Please give me your thought which style I should use? Minimalist : Full Detailed

Hi, I need you guys opinion regarding my writing of Tournament Fighting Scene. Is it easy to understand? or which part i should improve? Here's the fighting scene :

Greetings, I'm Daeron I'm still super newbie at literature art. Usually I only vent ideas into raw writing for lyrical purposes. But recently, i want to try something new, to turn my part of past story or memoir into "novel story" Your feedbacks are appreciated. Here's my Story : Soft...