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This will be my first Feedback post, I will read the 1st chapter of your stories Here are the rules: 1. First come first served 2. I will be looking at the synopsis as well so make it pop! 3. don't be nervous, this is my first time as well!

Well, Adventures of Arcade Girl has reached it's final Arc now comes the hard part, deciding what story should I do next? here are three choices: A Beast Tamer Story: I hear those are really popular on YouTube lately An Apocolypse Story: those are also getting a lot of traction A slice of Life...

Well, Adventures of Arcade Girl is about to reach it's final Arc, it's been a blast writing the tales my favorite sailor mouthed superhero, but a new question now remains, should I go ahead with a sequel, or should expand upon the lore with a prequel, or should I just go ahead with a different...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2303630/adventures-of-arcade-girl/ Hey everyone, before I get to work on Book 4, would anyone be interested in reviewing what I've got so far? It would really help with the story going forward!

It's the Appoclypse! Temperatures have plummeted to -60 degrees, Frozen Zombies roam the city streets, you and others like you are given the ability to survive this hell, but you can only choose one of four powers: 1. Thermal Body: your body radiates a firey aura, allowing you to survive the...

If you could be reborn as any animal, what would it be? Dinosaurs are allowed Endangered species are allowed Fantasy creatures are allowed, But only if they resemble animals (EX: Unicorns, Tanuki, Kitsune)

If you had superpowers, would you use them for Good, Evil, or yourself?

I need Feedback on this asshole character I created, His name is Kuzaryu Yaoi, and I think in nailed him, but I could use your input!

When I Created Kuzaryu Yaoi for Adventures of Arcade Girl, I wanted him to be the apex of spoiled, entitled, jerk characters, but that got me thinking, have any of you created characters like that?

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2303630/adventures-of-arcade-girl/ Book 1 is complete, Feedback is appreciated. Thanks to many of you have given me advice in the past, I hope this first installment is to your liking!

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2303630/adventures-of-arcade-girl/ Another saga in my journey to craft amazing stories, you feedback will help me shape this tale going forward! Ideas for Monsters will also be appreciated, you will be credited!

This Chapter Explaines where the Werewolf who Bit Bonnie came from, and why, you feedback is appreciated!!

Here are some ideas I have rattling about in my skull, which one do you think I should go for: Monsoon Apocolypse: The power of Water or the power of Earth, powers that two sisters have awakened, the MC chooses Water, while the spoiled sister choose Earth, unaware of the physical toll it takes...

Now, I know many of you have written at least one story involving Werewolves at some point in your lives, my question for you all is What kind of Werewolf do you prefer? The cute, fluffy, loyal kind, or the kind that would gladly reduce you to chunks of flesh within nanoseconds before eating...

Hey folks I think I got the relationship between Bonnie and Lavender nailed, but I still could use you critique!

What is your opinions on Incest in stories? I want to introduce it in my latest story, Bonnie's Full Moon Blues! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2281578/bonnies-full-moon-blues/ Keep in mind, both characters are 18 and 19 respectfully, thus within age of consent...

Your feedbakc is greatly needed and appreciated, this was very difficult to nail!

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2281578/bonnies-full-moon-blues/ This will be the first werewolf story i will write so feedback and criticism is welcome, also ideas for future antagonists will be welcome and credited...

Hey everyone, while I wait for inspiration to kick me in the teeth so I can drag a new story, how about I answer more of your burning questions about me! Same rules as last time, stories, my life, etc. nothing is off topic!

Sorry you guys hadn't heard from me in a while, I was sick as hell, I couldn't even leave my bed, let alone write! Tell me, were any of you so sick that you didn't even have the strength to write?