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  1. Anarchy666

    BLOODLINES... Draft #2 first chapters

    Appreciate the constructive criticism on my initial attempt, here's what I've got after starting over and taking those criticisms into account. Chapter 1: An Enemy Returns His hand gripped the handle of the arming sword as tightly as if letting go meant falling off of the face of...
  2. Anarchy666

    Just got started on an epic low fantasy, feedback requested.

    Here's the text: It has been over one thousand and one hundred years since the Ancient Elysian Empire fragmented into a thousand pieces, leaving behind a degenerate waste bathed in blood and destitute peasant masses in its wake. An era of feudalism had wrenched its talons across the...
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