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    What does your insights breakdown look like?

    I'm curious as to what others country breakdowns look like. You can find mine attached.
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    Writing How to handle 20 year montage

    I'm planning to have a chapter span 20 years with not too much happening, what I'm debating though is how to handle it. The book is a first person perspective of an invisible observer. This will be largely watching a child grow up from year 0 and become an adult in a medieval style village set...
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    Writing Prompt Your D&D group wake up as their characters

    Your D&D group wakes up as their characters and your DM is now the campaign’s villain. How do you all survive modern life (and each other) with magic and mundane bureaucracy standing in the way?
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    4 Chapters in, writing fifth, keen for some more feedback.

    I currently have 4 chapters published, and have had feedback from my wife and a reader, which has been great. But I would be keen for some others too, my current concern is the pacing, I'm not getting as far as I had planned in my outline, but is this ok? Also my Wife's complaint is that it...
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    OSRIC spells

    Is it generally acceptable to use the OSRIC spells and magic system in a book? It is open source, but I'm wondering what peoples thoughts are on it? My main concern would be tripping any weird copyright. https://osricrpg.com/
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    Writing I have one chapter to make my wife cry

    I plan to introduce and make my reader care about a character and then kill them off. My wife has challenged me to try and get her to cry. Any tips on how to get the reader to care about the character in question? Some things I have gleaned from a bit of research: - Make the person feel real...
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    Spammers?

    I've just published the first few chapters of my book, but I've already got 3 comments from people that seem not so genuine. Once you respond they offer to do some visualisation for you. I'm assuming this is a scam or just marketing. Anyone else experienced this?
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