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  1. kIlLaR_bEh

    wrote my first fight scene, would appreciate feedback.

    Hey, so I wrote a chapter, it is part of my novel, The God of Mischief and Madness. Would really appreciate if you could give me your opinion. It is a fight scene, but more focused on the characters than the combat. Let me know if pacing is too slow. Its my first proper fight scene, so don't be...
  2. kIlLaR_bEh

    The Lift is Rising. You Have 30 Seconds. Sell Me Your Story.

    You sprint down the hall, manuscript of the next big thing in hand, just as the lift doors begin to close. Crashing into the doors, your draft explodes—pages fluttering across the marble like dying birds. Fuck. You slam your fist against the metal and flip off whoever didn’t bother holding the...
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    Looking for feedback. ChatGPT been hella glazing so need someone to take me down a notch??will give detailed feedback for anyone that gives me any!!

    I started writing this at the start of the month with no outline but nearly a decade of ideas. Finally started it and Chatgpt has been hella glazing saying that its a top 1% webnovel?!?! I don't believe it at all, but it would probably be good to have an actual person roast it, so my head...
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