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    Sketch dumps.

    Inspired by few people in here, I decided to dump my sketches here.
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    Finally completed 10 chapters.

    Finally completed writing my first 10 chapters, I know it is not much, but as a new author, it feels good. :blob_aww:
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    Finally done.

    Finally done with my MC's portrait, forgive my background, nothing came to my mind.
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    What is a shoutout swap?

    I just received a request from another author in royal road, buy I don't know what it is and how does it work.
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    I wrote a identity confusion chapter?

    As the title suggests, I wrote a chapter with identity confusion, and I want to know if it was conveyed. And your thoughts about the narrative.
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    Need review?

    As many writers pointed out, I realised prose meant the whole chapter with context and imagery, which pulls the reader into the world. So i tried my best and completed the chapter with as much description i can provide dynamically.
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    Writing Prose quality check?

    I want to improve my prose; as such, I am learning new things and implementing them in my new chapters. I want to know if the prose in this section is good, bad, or downright shit. The metal floor shuddered as Zerra crashed; the cheers that echoed a moment ago now died down. Silence swallowed...
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    Opinion on character interaction and action.

    I need an opinion on a particular scene that includes action and interaction between characters. I would appreciate it if you tell me what you felt while reading, only your feeling not feedback. Thanks
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    How to move forward?

    How to stay motivated to write? I am a new writer and my work is also very new, I am aware of the fact that most web novels don't take off if they don't have at least 50 chapter or so. But still the lack fo engagement and declining views are very demotivating. So I want to know how did you guys...
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    Meet Aegis the gambling addict.

    Ofc the artwork is not finished yet
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    Is hinting at SA done to child too much?

    Is hinting or including a scene where it is implied that a child has gone through it or is going through it too much? I am writing a dark fantasy novel, and I want to know how much is too much?
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    Suggestions on my fictional hellish city.

    Inanitas is the domain of Vorax and one of the systematic domains of Abaddon. Theme - A city built on greed. The pitt is one of the main cities because of the Arena and Golden Chapel. The story is set in this city. The city is divided into four sections. 1. Upper Pitt - Ducal families and...
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    Opinion on horror( or eeriness ) in my work.

    I tried my hand at horror in this chapter and want to see how I carried the eeriness and horror. ch4 Aegis exhaled as he prepared himself, “The Ashen chapel was once a beautiful monument of the Pitt,” he rubbed his palms as the night carried faint whispers. “Citizens of the Pitt showed their...
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    Revised chapter 1 and synopsis.

    As someone said, my chapter 1 sucked. It had a soulless MC. My synopsis was also misleading. So, I've revised it and rewritten my synopsis. I would appreciate your feedback on it. Thank you. Synopsis: Aegis has no interest in destiny. All he wants is coins. In the infernal city of Inanitas, a...
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    Opinion on selfish MCs.

    What do people think about cutthroat selfish MCs that only care about themselves and occasionally their friends/family? I want to know if people like them or not.
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    Re-drawn.

    Since many people mistook my character for a girl I've re-drawn his design and added a few details.
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    Feedback on my action block.

    I want to know if this particular block felt good or bad, i would appreciate if you can state your reasons. The shadow in front of him lunged. Aegis crouched and shielded himself, Growls resounded above him for a moment. They ended with a slash, the shadow in front of him flopped onto the...
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    How to write previous relationships.

    There are two characters in my novel who share a past, and it will be referenced in future multiple times. How can i write the relationship between them without confusing the readers?
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    Opinion on my new cover art.

    I re-did my cover art as people said. I need opinion on this new one and if it is better than the old one or not. Old one. New one.
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    Character feedback.

    I need feedback on one of my characters, his name is aegis and this chapter perfectly captures how he behaves. I want to know your opinions on this particular character. Chapter 4 - The boy from the arena. Aegis wiped the table clean. His faded tunic bore tiny holes, and his burning red eyes...
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