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I'll read the first chapter of your story. I'm a better reader than a writer, so my points will be focused on how it made me feel than a super in depth analysis. As such, don't expect developmental level dissection: it'll just be a wall of text about what I liked and didn't like. I also have a...

Been working non stop to improve, but it seems like I hit a wall. Be honest with your criticism, but try not to be too harsh because I'm built to cry easily. Also, I love reading stories, so if you wanna drop your story down here for me to review also feel free. I'm terrible at really giving...

Probably been asked before, but how do you make dialog less scripted. I've done that "just say it out loud" stuff that others said, but it still feels stiff when I come back and read it.