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O mighty one, could you kindly spare a few minutes to give feedback on the following chapter: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1667370-creature-feature/chapter/2138524/ Much obliged by the way

I'm unable to get proper spacing in the latest chapter I posted. More like no spacing actually. Is there something my ignoramus self should be made aware of? PS: Any help is greatly appreciated.

A very terrifying link I've been told but it's safe https://1drv.ms/w/c/38c795050893b76a/IQCST3xw8DNHRqjPinFG-jlwAbL3aFuaLS--QfI5ZD4uMlE?e=piQIOL It's just a small rewrite. I'd be supremely grateful if anyone checks it out

https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1667370-creature-feature/chapter/1867081/ Any gents willing to give it a gander. Much obliged by the way. PS: Thank You for your time

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1667370/creature-feature/ It's about 17k ish words. Anyone taking time out for this is a right gentleman. Much obliged.

Getting swamped by half a dozen 'Artists' who love my work. I'll wait a bit and open an anime studio or something.

Humor Writing the trench warfare of writing. Oh mighty one won't you assist this filthy vagrant on his quest? Excerpt Option 1: The crisp autumn air whipped dust across our faces as we made our way through the bazaar’s tight backstreets. My gaze darted cautiously from shadow to shadow, wary of...

https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1096576-son-of-the-sun/chapter/1170315/

A significant retooling effort has been undertaken for it (For the first seven chapters). Waking up in a ditch with no memory of who he is or how he got there, Solen embarks on a perilous journey to piece together his shattered past. As he navigates through old and new challenges, he discovers...

It's been chaotic to say the least. Anyone up for feedback/review swaps I'm game. On your end if you could kindly go over just the prologue + 4 chapters (less if you feel its not your cup of tea), that should be enough for a proper sniff test. PS: Much obliged...

I'm back again. If you can kindly spare the time, I'd appreciate a good round of honest feedback on a rewrite/ slight retooling of a chapter. PS1: If you want me to look into your work. I'd be happy to. PS2: Much obliged by the way.

If you can kindly spare the time, I'd appreciate a good round of honest feedback. PS1: If you want me to look into your work. I'd be happy to. PS2: Much obliged by the way. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/1096576-son-of-the-sun/chapter/1206875/

My computer was out so I had to write the chapter on my phone and then make a hundred edits later. With such a rough development I request honest feedback on the last chapter of my story. PS: Much obliged for your time.

No long introduction. Just short abstraction.

I have to ask, why do the readers(which the authors try to appeal to) find the old Dragon Ball Z formula so attractive. The old my number is bigger than your number. But the fights don't change in any way or the displayed feats. Nor it's effects on the surroundings.

It be a wee bit racy. So if that offends please look away.

Greetings, I request feedback and general advice for a beginner effort from yours truly. Any help/guidance will also be very appreciated. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1096576/son-of-the-sun/