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  1. YusakuRay

    Feedback on my action sequence.

    Hi y'all I was hoping to ask for some advice and general tips on an action sequence I made in my story and if its easy to follow along. Of course only if you have the time to read I'll leave the quote below so you wont have to look through the whole chapter for it...
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    Feedback on my Introduction

    Hi, y'all I recently started writing and completed my Introduction of my novel, If you have time I'd like some feedback in these parts primarily 1. 1st chapter because I notice most read the first chapter and don't move on to the next would like to know you're impressions/opinions if I should...
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    couple more quick questions need help with

    Hi again, third post on forum wooo. I just need help figuring out the UI and some stuff before I finish the introductory chapters of my story If you can't answer all any amount would be helpful. 1. Is there a way if I have my character listen to a specific song to link it in my story? does...
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    first chapter review

    I just recently finally got myself to post my first chapter and would like some feedback also wondering if its worth just posting second chapter since thats when my character actually gets isekai'd? or to just wait til the next day? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/994407/my-eternal-afterlife/...
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    New Author help. pls.

    I need help before i post my web novel if anyone can help answer some of questions i have 1. I have everything written in a paragraphs should I revise my novel in the style everyone else has with each line of dialogue seperate from each other for clarity? 2. Should I keep working on a subpar...
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