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Hello everyone! I've been posting here for a little more than a month, and I was wondering if there was a way to motivate more comments from readers. It feels great knowing some people are checking my story, but I really wanted to know what are the things they are liking and the parts I could...

Would anyone be willing to give a go to my first few chapters and tell me what you think I'm doing well, and what I still need to improve on? I've received some feedback already and have been thinking about editing a few things, but would like to hear some more opinions. Thank you all! The...