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  1. K_Nishi

    Looking for feedback on Chapters 1–3 of HELL’S RETURNERS

    Hello everyone, I’m looking for feedback on the opening three chapters of my story HELL’S RETURNERS. It’s a dark revenge action story set in a near-future world involving cults, abuse, and awakened powers. If anyone has time to read the first three chapters, I’d especially appreciate thoughts...
  2. K_Nishi

    Looking for feedback on tone & thematic clarity (completed short series)

    Hello everyone, I’m looking for some focused feedback on a completed short series I recently published on Scribble Hub. Title: The Forbidden Spell: A War Witch’s Love Length: 12 chapters / ~5.6k words Status: Completed This is not a LitRPG or progression-focused story. I was intentionally...
  3. K_Nishi

    This is not a story about a cute heroine who always makes the right choices.

    This is not a story about a cute heroine who always makes the right choices. If you enjoy morally ambiguous female protagonists and stories that don’t follow familiar templates, this might be for you. If you end up enjoying it, I’d really appreciate hearing your thoughts in the comments...
  4. K_Nishi

    Looking for feedback on a short completed dark fantasy (4 chapters / ~2k words)

    Hi! I recently finished a short dark-fantasy story: “Leo, the Archmage of Blazing Flames” (COMPLETED) It’s a quick read with psychological elements — a hero whose overwhelming power hides a fragile identity. I would love to receive any thoughts — pacing, themes, character empathy, or...
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