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    Underwater world

    I thought about it, and probably this is the first thing I’ll write about here. There will be an underwater world, a world of sands, and a cosmic world — probably in the form of magic. What do you think about that?
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    Femdom mafia

    I understand that what you're saying is a joke. But if you actually think about it, a really hardcore domination plot would be if a female mafia boss performed surgery on a guy without his consent and without full anesthesia, while at the same time explaining everything in detail, showing him...
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    Femdom mafia

    I'll probably disappoint you, but female mafia bosses really did exist and still exist today. Did you know that?
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    Real-Life Horrors

    What do you think about Theranos?
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    Real-Life Horrors

    I've already replied a bit about anesthesia and sleep paralysis earlier, so start reading there so I don't repeat myself. I'll get more to the point now: I'm really sorry you had to go through that! I'll try to explain possible reasons for what happened: 1 You were in a weakened state because...
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    Real-Life Horrors

    Are you talking about the so-called quantum vacuum bomb? I heard about it when I was reading up on the cobalt bomb. A lot of people — myself included — think that both of these bombs are impossible, and I agree, although for my book I’m going to write that a radiation bomb is possible. In the...
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    Real-Life Horrors

    I thought about this for a long time before replying here. I've been studying this topic for quite a while. Tell me, is it allowed by the rules here to write about medications and their effects on the brain? In reality, very few people know this, but an anesthesiologist is one of the most...
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    Real-Life Horrors

    I don’t know why, but I just can’t imagine horror in a magic/fantasy genre. Horror in our real world — yes, absolutely. Horror in a cyberpunk world — sure, that works. Horror in space — it’s a bit trickier, but still possible. But horror in a magic world? No way, I can’t picture it at all...
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    Well, I might start posting here after all.

    You know, I think I’ve already said this here more than once. What I want to say is that probably most people on this site are 40 or 50 years old. Maybe 60, 70, or even older. The very fact that you’re discussing Twilight (2008) and Fifty Shades of Grey (2015) already suggests that you’re all...
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    Femdom mafia

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    Femdom mafia

    How do you feel about femdom and femdom in the mafia? I often think about plots set in the present day without magic. Although it could also be done in the cyberpunk genre or in space, when magic is added, for some reason it feels to me that the seriousness of what is happening gets lost...
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    Real-Life Horrors

    What do you think about real-life horrors? For example: illness, the mafia, the elements, battles? Would you like to write about them or have you read about them?
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    Underwater world

    The fact is that 80% of our world is water and it is very beautiful underwater.
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    Underwater world

    Hello everyone! This is my first post, and I hope you will not judge me too harshly? I hope I have not chosen the wrong section for the topic? It may seem funny to you, but I have poor English skills and dyslexia, so please do not be offended if there are mistakes. I think a lot about the...
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    [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters)

    It is very sad that you thought that way. Perhaps it is related to the fact that I do not know English and I have dyslexia. I think I should try writing at length so that you understand my thoughts. There are no malicious thoughts in my text! There are no demands in my text! There are no hidden...
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    [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters)

    I'm sorry, I really didn't want to offend you! I said what I thought, but I didn't accuse you. I was on a site where they are very strict about advertising one's own work, you see? Every site has its own rules, which shape your opinion and attitude. But in fact, any rules suit me as long as...
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    [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters)

    I'm sorry, perhaps I have been thinking too much about internet advertising theories. I could write about that here, but I think this is clearly not the place? Artistic themes in an anime style are probably preferred here? I put myself in the thread author's shoes and thought about aggressive...
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    [Feedback Request-First-timer] Does my opening hook work? (First 3 chapters)

    I have a feeling that you are being cruel to him? He is a beginner; he doesn't know! You can scare people away like that, do you understand? Do you remember your first work? I am almost certain that your first work was not very good, even though you tried hard? Try to gently guide him in the...
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    Would my story do better here than on RR?

    I can tell a story. This story will likely not be liked by anyone here, but it is interesting to me. I love artificial intelligence! You don't like that position, do you? Among people who are usually almost always against AI, artists take first place, and writers take second. Strange, but...
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