Search results

Hello friends, I'll be honest and say that I was not too sure about what to do with the cover of my book. I didn't want it to be cool dude with weapon/ magic, or just the mc's face. I see that alot. I didn't have a notable waifu to pose sexily with him. I couldn't just do fancy magic school...

I modified the prologue and want to see if the story flows better and if the hook is clear. Also what do you think about the mc? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2181545/altered-one/

For me, I keep getting he is okay or not bad, but he needs more. At worst I heard was that he was boring, or lacked aura. If he already has the basic stuff: a goal, challenges, flaws, what is the missing piece? How do you turn an okay or meh mc to one that the reader will get excited over?

Old sketch back when Casimir was Ivan.