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  1. Garolymar

    What do you think of my Sound based abilities.

    It's short, about 900 words, I think the Vocarii are my favourite thing I've come up with for the Sound school. (I haven't come up with anything as interesting as the Scent ability though, I really like that one) The Aurelans Blizzard Chorus is okay, and Beast Talk is something everyone has seen...
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    What are your favorite powers or abilities you came up with?

    I love convoluted triggers to abilities that work in very specific ways. Stuff like Jojo stands were a big inspiration for how the magic system in my own world works. I do love the classics as well, throwing a fireball at somebody is always neat but when there's a unique method to conjuring that...
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    Anybody here read the Inheritors? The ending really confused me.

    So in general I've been trying to get into more books, and uh... I picked this one to start with (still not sure if it was a good idea) cause I've never really seen a serious movie or game or story about cavemen before. It was pretty good, but very confusing, and I was wondering if anyone else...
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    Cosmology Idea discussion.

    So I've had this idea floating around for a bit, one I'd like to share with people because, well even if I ever get that far into the main story I dunno if I'd ever get to talk about it too much in detail, and I think it's a cool concept. Basically it is an ocean dyson sphere esque bubble verse...
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    What Blurb sounds more enticing to you?

    Never been good at selling myself or stories. I was wondering what blurb you think might be more interesting? This is a smaller one, more focused on the main characters: Brothers Callahan and Rowan wield beastly binds to save their dying mom—one fragile, one fearless. In Onoria’s empire, they...
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    Do you use swears in your fantasy?

    Sometimes there really is no better way to express how a character feels in the moment than an Fbomb, but maybe that's due to my poor vocabulary, still I do try to use them sparingly or try to come up with world appropriate ones... but those usually sound cheesy to me when I'm the one writing...
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    If you have the time, I'd love some feed back.

    So, I think my story has reached a decent point where the characters are developed beyond just an introduction, the plot has swept the main trio into the grander events, and there are breadcrumbs in the earlier chapters that get answered later to help establish the flow of what's to come. But I...
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    Would you be offended if a commisonar gave you ai generated examples of what they wanted a character to look like?

    So, for fun I've generated a lot of images what my characters look like using image generation. most of them are just all over the place, and it's hard to get results replicated. and I thought maybe in the future it'd be nice to have a character focused cover art, but I do wonder, would it be...
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    Do you ever listen to music while you write or brain storm.

    For me a good soundtrack really helps me set a mood for a scene or gets the juices flowing for daydreaming about what might happen next. I'll put on something sombre when I'm trying to get into the mood to write something sad, or put on some of my favourite battle themes from games or movies to...
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