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  1. EngineGear

    Forgotten Title Looking for a story

    It's called "The Witch of the Invalides"? It is a story that tears down every common power fantasy Self-Insert Fic and Isekai trope and offers a different perspective from one of the harem members.
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    A idea I'm giving out for free

    Canterlot General: Healing Harmony Premise: In the bustling city of Canterlot, a state-of-the-art medical facility known as Canterlot General stands as a beacon of hope and healing. The hospital is renowned for its highly skilled medical professionals, including a group of extraordinary...
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    Feedback for my organization

    Something I organized about two weeks ago: The Red Grave Order is a religious organization dedicated to the eradication of creatures of darkness. The Order originated in the 1st century of the New Age and is comprised of Exorcists, individuals who have been trained and equipped with Caliburn...
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    Short Story Critique

    I wrote a short story out of boredom, so expect some vague descriptions; critique is welcomed. Not too pleasant or brutal. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/613538/club-hysteria/
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    Writing Writing a terrorist group

    The Dire Talon's origin is that some of its founding members left the Turtledove Foundation, a peacekeeping organization, and chose a more "hands-on" approach. How should I expand upon this?
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    Writing Prompt #3

    Premise: Scott is having an argument with his colleague Jin Yamada, questioning why he hates beastmen and demihumans so much. Jin reveals that when he was a preteen, he picked a fight against five dog beastmen with a pocket knife, in order to protect a Grey Wolf kemonomimi that was being bullied...
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    Writing Prompt #2

    Premise: Laika is a tall Grey Wolf Beastman with grey hair kept as a ponytail, fuschia eyes and a scar running down her left eye. She wears a long white lab coat, azure scrubs, and a stethoscope around her neck. Laika has an ability called Flamy Cure, which she can use magenta-colored flames to...
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    Writing Prompt Writing Prompt #1 ~

    Premise: A wolf demihuman terrorist shows one of the main characters her scars and brands she received from being tortured and experimented on thanks to his zaibatsu's sister company. He understands, but points out that she killed innocent people to get revenge; It doesn't excuse her actions...
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    How would you deconstruct the “Abused and Neglected Male Reader” concept?

    For me, the logical conclusion would be a whiny loser that no one would take seriously.
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    Pet Peeve Tropes and how to deconstruct them

    For me, it's "If You Kill Him, You'll Be Just Like Him". I have a plot point in my story where the heroes capture the villain instead of killing him. Their reason: they're still rookie adventurers attending school. Killing him without permission would severely bite them in the ass later.
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    Feedback on a quote.

    As the title suggests, I need some feedback from this quote. It's from a worldbuilding codex I wish to write in the future.
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    How to make a deconstruction parody of a character?

    The character I'm writing is an Expy of Jin Mazama from Join the Pack! Seton Academy. Jin might be the most unlikable MC I've ever seen and the reason for being racist is stupid as hell. For an animal expert, he stupidly tried to fight bears with an icicle to protect a wolf girl Holding a...
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    Zombies based on blood type

    I was thinking about writing about a zombie virus that turns people based on blood type. Some turn into slow, pale-looking zombies with milky white eyes and others turn into fast, bloody veins zombies with blood-red eyes. The incubation period varies from person to person Any tips and advice...
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    Expanding upon my monsters

    I'm currently writing my story with these monsters as recurring antagonists. I need advice and feedback so I can better explain them properly. In the world I'm writing, the Umbra Monstras are bloodthirsty, ravenous monsters driven by base instincts, inhabiting various parts of Aion and in their...
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    Writing Need tips and notes for writing Battle Academies for Adventurers

    1. What is the era? Sci-Fi with fantasy elements, Think Final Fantasy XV mixed with Overwatch and Star Wars 2. What is the academy's premier superpower? Summoning Magic, Barrier Magic, Weaponized Automotons. 3. What is the reason for its existence? From hunting demons to fighting off...
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    One question about writing a villain:

    I have this crime boss villain. He's charismatic as he is ruthless, and he knows when to call quits when the situation goes south. If, for some reason, he got possessed an ancient soul of a warrior who's been fighting evil for generations, would that ruin the character?
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    Writing On a scale of 1 to 10, how despicable are my antagonistic characters?

    Viktor Dragovich: Ex-Special Forces turned mercenary. Has anger issues, is a major victim complex, and is an attention-seeking bastard. He was disowned by his own country and now seeks revenge. (Callsign: Tungsten Epta) Traits: wrath, pettiness, egomania, overconfidence, cruelty...
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    Chapter 1 Feedback

    I just published the first chapter of my story and looking for feedback. https://www.scribblehub.com/read/315598-radiant-cross-voyage--volume-/chapter/350255/
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    Writing Critique my main protagonists

    Daniel Estimar (The Leader/Heart/Optimist): Prince of Caelania, Grandson of King-Emperor Raymond Estimar. Has dreams to be an adventurer, just like his grandmother. Trained for most of his life with his older brother and sister, he got accepted into Grand Ridge Academy one year early thanks to...
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    Writing Critique My Magic Systems

    Ambiance: Ambiance, in a sense, is the art of creating, manipulating, and shaping the invisible etheric phenomenon known as "aura", produced by a person and surrounds them with spiritual and life energy. Depending on the user, the Ambiance can resemble blazes, power, smoke, waves, tornadoes...
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