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  1. ChubbyLiv

    1st person or 3rd person

    I prefer third person with character's thoughts. I like it when the character is a bit mysterious. :blob_popcorn: For first person, the character has to be hella good for me to read. :blobspearpeek:
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    A man's private area. (18+)

    I try to be suggestive but sometimes it can't be helped. :blob_cringe: Thanks for replies! It helped a lot.
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    A man's private area. (18+)

    When readind/writing novels, what names do you prefer for a man's private area? :blob_hide: I feel awkard when I need to choose a correct form for smut scenes. I don't want my readers to be turned off. :blob_teary:
  4. ChubbyLiv

    Chapter titles... What is your opinion?

    All my chapters have a title. They are not for my readers but for me. ←(*꒪ヮ꒪*) I can quickly remember the content of the whole chapter with the title. Chapter titles make the novel more neat and organized.
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    I'm newbie here! And i need a feedback!

    Hope it helped. I checked your first chapter. And it was understandable. Just the synopsis (Blurb) is hard to understand. I´m also writing my first novel. Feel free to check it, haha! I´d appreciate any criticism. QT: Against My Will!
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    I'm newbie here! And i need a feedback!

    0. I'll skip grammar. I'm bad at grammar myself. 1. I see no chemistry between those two animals snail x lion? It sounds a bit strange together. 2. "In this world, there is a beautiful love where two people understand each other when reunited after a few years." From their conversation, it's...
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