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    Fellas...

    If you liked her before her turned to him, then consequently stopped loving him(her), no. If you like her, now him, after you found out the him(her), was not a her, yes.
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    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    Care to review my first chapter? https://www.scribblehub.com/series/516050/space-patroller-miya/
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    Would love if someone gave me a really honest review of my new story...

    New blood. Also, different authors have different ways of writing stories. It may seem absurd, but it's true. While there may be a seemingly popular strategy or technique used, it's always best to show your genuine attitude to your work. Your readers will realize your efforts and do one of...
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    Can anyone help me with grammar correction in my novel?

    I use PWA for pacing, style, use of weak words in between sentences, and just any general improvement it has for me. Grammarly is nice, but it isn't made for writers and is more business-oriented for general corrections. That is why I take PWA more seriously concerning word choice and grammar...
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    Can anyone help me with grammar correction in my novel?

    I like this. This is usually my strategy as well, but in the middle of Grammarly and Text-to-Speech, I utilize ProWritingAid.
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    Synopsis feedback. T_T

    The second one is quite nice—more of a synopsis than the prior one. As per the comment above, you're free to use either, but if you plan to post the story elsewhere you should use the polished synopsis.
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    Free First Chapter Feedback

    You reviewed my first chapter some time ago, and I was wondering if you do second rounds. :s_wink: If the answer is yes, please take a gander. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/516050/space-patroller-miya/
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    Synopsis feedback. T_T

    For web novels, it'll slide. For ScribbleHub, it'll side. But for anywhere else, you'll need to write anything or anywhere else to introduce a setting, idea, or character. Your reader needs to be sure of at least some aspect of your book before they begin to read.
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    Readers vs Writers!

    You must not pay attention man. You can get the lore of half these people's lives by their comments, actually.
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    Is bestiality alow on SH ?

    I'm not into that, but I'll fight for the rights if you do post it. Not because I'm a good person, but because I'm chaotic neutral.
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    First Chapter Analysis

    Please and thank you. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/516050/space-patroller-miya/
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    Dump in a sense. A d20 battle system for writing.

    Good lord... What is all of that...
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    Now Live! ScribbleHub Explorer – An AI-Powered Novel Recommendation Engine: Feedback Needed!

    The first book recommendation is always excellent, like the ones I wish I'd actually see more of when browsing. The ones that follow are :poop:, but that may be a personal opinion.
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    Broke past 3000 readers.

    Leess gooo
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    My current state of experience as a college student

    Don't know who told you this, but that's totally untrue. I can vouch that for some people with the right drive and skills, there are jobs for them, but not most of the time. For instance, when I graduated from grade school, I got an internship as an Accel. Developer for Roblox Co. and was...
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    add audio file

    Don't add it unless RoyalRoad or Wattpad has done it. If SH is the testing ground for audio files, not to be rude, but our community is just going to make it weird by adding sex noises to all of their smut scenes, which is basically their entire books. No, no, no. I've read tons of books where...
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    You snooze, you lose, buster. ??

    You snooze, you lose, buster. ??
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    :cool: You made me tip my shades down. You fine thing you. :oops::s_wink::sneaky:

    :cool: You made me tip my shades down. You fine thing you. :oops::s_wink::sneaky:
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    Why do all the males you see have the urgency to bring out their belts and lash you? Are you...

    Why do all the males you see have the urgency to bring out their belts and lash you? Are you, perhaps, the problem?
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