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  1. Frankey

    I wouldn't mind reading your stuff and give you feedback.

    Yo, I gave it a look and checked it out, nice zombie story It's mostly self-deprecating humor. I don't feel like that! don't worry too much about it ;) I gave yours a read, Also, as I see more and more people piling up, I think I will read your first chapter rather than the whole thing and...
  2. Frankey

    I wouldn't mind reading your stuff and give you feedback.

    You don't need to, but I left you a comment I will read a bit more and see if I like it.
  3. Frankey

    I wouldn't mind reading your stuff and give you feedback.

    Hello, I am Frankey, a waste of space and a local nuisance. I want to start by saying that I am terrible at giving advice, but I wouldn't mind reading your chapter and letting you know if I notice anything wrong. My credentials are that I have two eyes and I write stories, and they can be...
  4. Frankey

    What do you use to write with?

    I vibes slopped my own writing software.
  5. Frankey

    Trigger Warning or Content Warning or Mature Genre?

    I agree, you do you. But let's not lie to ourselves into thinking that trigger warnings are helpful. I think the other warnings help because maybe I don't want to read SMUT, or GORE. Or, on the contrary, you want to read those. But for trigger warnings, they not only don't help; they make you...
  6. Frankey

    Trigger Warning or Content Warning or Mature Genre?

    Trigger warnings are some pop psychology that mutated out of Tumblr. It should be ignored. I use the other ones.
  7. Frankey

    How traumatized are/will your characters (be)?

    In my second story, I made my character broken. And he has a breakdown, like a few chapters in.
  8. Frankey

    What type of literature inspires your writing?

    To be honest, the thing that inspired me to write was Jack Vance, the Dying Earth, and Fafhard and the Grey Mouser. I love my morally grey but well well-intentioned heroes. Mostly 70's pulp trashy things and 20's weird fiction. I also like Moorcock.
  9. Frankey

    Writing Who is the Narrator in Your Fiction?

    It mostly depends on the chapter, but its usually the POV of the main character or maybe someone else who watches the main character from the outside.
  10. Frankey

    Would love views on my work

    Well, I read the first chapter, and I liked how it was written, though I think you should write down which chapter corresponds to which number. Walking over all the general advice, I feel you wanted to create Berserk without its moral complexity. I get that it's smut and that the main character...
  11. Frankey

    Writing Finally, and Committing To The Bit (Rant).

    Like, not to be mean, but why, instead of writing an entire forum post, don't you write an entire story the size of a forum post? You should stop thinking about doing and just do.
  12. Frankey

    Fallout New Vegas: Is Caesar's Legion cringe?

    The Legion is a bunch of larpers, but by the standards of the wastes, they are thousands of times less corrupt than the NCR, which had become a bloated bureaucracy. The NCR is better in the sense that it's better for the stability of whatever will be left for the wastes. The Legion has the...
  13. Frankey

    How do you come up with names?

    100% baby name generator website, or I just Google "X culture name."
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