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Phew, after 91 chapters and 352,080 total words so far, I almost have my first amateurishly edited work complete. I had a blast writing it, learned so many new things, understood where I made blatant mistakes in pacing, and (hopefully) gained a proper work ethic. It was fun! But I hate editing...

Thank you for your offer. If it is okay, here is my story: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/860302/a-rats-problems/ .

Thank you! The title should be fixed and the cover is added. Will do, and I am not a good writer; my prose and story as of yet are at their lowest, and my grammar could use help. I have no idea how to shorten what is already being written (I try to go one chapter one event or scene), but this...

Thank you for your kind offer! If this is okay, here is my story https://www.scribblehub.com/series/860302/a-rats-problems/

Good day. If it is okay, please check my story and tell me your honest thoughts about why it is bad: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/860302/a-rats-problems/

Then Ravages of Time, Kodoku Experiment, or Cannon God Exaxxion (there is a lot of fanservice in this one; bad damn it, it explores the propaganda, gaslighting, and how both sides can be shitty perfectly).

I recommend Usogui manga.

That's easy, on every site that I post my stories they have consistently the least amout of readers or followers. Math doesn't lie, my writing and style are just bad. I'd like to lie and say that it is because English is my second language, but truth be told, it is only part of the problem; I...

Sorry to bother you, but I need some help, if you have time to waste. My story is rather bad (one of the worst, actually): https://www.scribblehub.com/series/860302/a-rats-problems/ , but I need some guidance on what aspects of my writing (if any) I should work on. I know my writing is bad, but...

Thanks for the info! My story has 778 views, 15 readers, 38 chapters, and 164,391 words. I guess I am at rock bottom in those 72%, but I will finish it for the people who are reading it. Hopefully, I can learn from this and deliver a better reading experience for the readers.

Read it and its sequel. I was kind of annoyed at how biased the author is against adopted children (Since Amy is a kid of a supervillain and is adopted, she ended up irredimebly vile to both herself and everyone else, Victoria ended up being the true hero) and how bad people got away without any...

Thank you! I have checked both chapters, and I have already found the same sentence I used two times in a row. There are undeniably other mistakes, and I am so sorry about this blunder. Live and learn, but it does feel embarrassing to miss something so obvious))) About tags, yes, you are right...

Thank you for the kind offer! If that is okay, I would like some feedback: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/860302/a-rats-problems/

Thanks for the kind offer! I would like some feedback too, if possible: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/860302/a-rats-problems/

I can use feedback to get better, if this is okay: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/860302/a-rats-problems/

Have you read Usogui? The manga has some really cool fights. If it is only fights you are looking for, you can safely skip the plot and just enjoy the battles themselves.

I would want to become one, but to be fair, with my skills this isn't happening anytime soon. Great for you, I hope you find success and happiness at your new calling!

If possible, I would like to have some feedback. Be honest, if it's trash, it's trash: https://www.scribblehub.com/read/626553-problems-in-the-desolation/chapter/626555/

Then Neuro: Supernatural Detective, manga version. Anime adaptation is weird. You have an Ainz-like character who is seemingly going to stomp out any and all opposition... Until you face said opposition. The true main bad guys are beyond evil in what they do, I am not sure how this manga stayed...

Not sure about shonen, but out of mangas I like. Usogui. Ravages of Time. Feng Shen Ji. These three are my current favorites. I mean, we have smart Lu Bu and Dong Zhuo in the Ravages of Time, and their plans are actually really solid! Feng Shen Ji is just a treat. You have a villainous...