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  1. LilTV1155

    Writing Things that only Tyrants, Evils, and Criminals would say to their Victims before the Crime?

    Never heard of Ligma. I couldn't tell whether the speaker's being revenge edgy or NTR edgy? That sound funny either way, lol.
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    Editing Mode: Immediate Auto-Incorrection

    Okay. Thanks Tony!
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    Writing Things that only Tyrants, Evils, and Criminals would say to their Victims before the Crime?

    The line that silence all defiance in a modern world and also calls for a violent Criminal Killer like Dexter. The hired hitman's last words to the target. That sounds like a scumbag CEO modern day setting or something a patriarch would tell to his um........daughter victim. A bit weak. But...
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    Writing Things that only Tyrants, Evils, and Criminals would say to their Victims before the Crime?

    What are things that only Tyrants, Evils, and Criminals would dare say to their Victims? Like the local duke's son who abuse his power by propositioning and seizing peasant women from the villages as concubines? Tyrants who want to possess someone for being too beautiful? What if that someone...
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    Reincarnation yes or no? if so which race?

    Mage Bird. Male would be better.
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    Writing [Tutorial] The Secret to Proper Paragraphing and Dialogue

    You guys . . . . okay, I said my piece. No need to waste my time on this drama whether history, records, statistic, and whatever get involved. If some of you think that I'm a coward for backing out of this thread, that's fine. I don't really care for that because I am going to use that time to...
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    Editing Mode: Immediate Auto-Incorrection

    Yes. Unlike the Edit Mode, it show a blank drop-list for words.
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    You are a Old Litch, explain what a soul is to a curious mortal. I.E. Are souls ever present, is it a particle, are souls immortal, or do they decay?

    Too long. You just got done in b Goblin Slayer's dagger throw. lol Edit: Source of Saying: Goblin Slayer: Brand New Day Chapter 6.5 (Mangadex.tv) Correction: Could be Chapter 6.5 or 7, depending where you read it from.
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    Writing [Tutorial] The Secret to Proper Paragraphing and Dialogue

    You are right about the copypasted translated texts. It's a mess. It's hard to tell who's speaking. Ellipses are fine to use. But I think that one got abused too much for speechless or shock silence. Where's the Who Verb, "Dialogue?" I understand why people don't like using verbs. But the Who...
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    You are a Old Litch, explain what a soul is to a curious mortal. I.E. Are souls ever present, is it a particle, are souls immortal, or do they decay?

    The thread guy probably want something you can explain to a little kid. Not too complicated or too elementary. Just something to get across. If anything, I say Soul is Water.
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    Do you like slice of life? Why?

    What you can learn from slice of life. People complains because they want dramas and actions.
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    You are a Old Litch, explain what a soul is to a curious mortal. I.E. Are souls ever present, is it a particle, are souls immortal, or do they decay?

    Soul is the life force energy and power contained in everything, dead or alive. Mana, aura, chi, chakra, etc. only come when an individual learn to use the forces of their soul, their power, the forces of natures, the forces of elements, physics, and whatsoever.
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    Writing [Tutorial] The Secret to Proper Paragraphing and Dialogue

    In English, please give us two or three examples of how to combine dialogues and actions. I would like to have some references to check with. By the way, do not throw textbook pictures at us. It's hard to learn anything from that. Just use your own words.
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    Writing [Tutorial] The Secret to Proper Paragraphing and Dialogue

    Rules or not. Just make your story and characters clear to everyone. If we are talking about details, you either draw it yourself and post regardless of bad skill. Or just paint a picture of descriptions for other to follow. Avoid misspellings if you can. Don't be mean if you can. If you...
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    Character death

    That cuteness does not justify "assault" actions. That character's background cannot redeem what she just attempted to do or have done. Also assaults are hardly something to laugh at just because the attacker is "opposite gender, cute, friendly, misunderstood, etc." because that topic can be...
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    War Crimes In Web Novels

    Forgot to add: Exposure Lv. + Society's Reactions + Killer's Background Just imagine you got an army of psychopaths, pedophiles, drug runners, rapists, sociopaths, torturers, traitors, etc. and murderers of superiors, comrades, civilians. Violence can get really creative in ways no normie...
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    Editing Mode: Immediate Auto-Incorrection

    No software used from mobile device. But that auto-incorrecting is make storywriting very hard when half the page are littered with misspellings during edit mode. When I go back to correct the words, the correct words get changed into something else again until 2nd or 3rd /4th time.
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    War Crimes In Web Novels

    That would be conspiracy fictions. As for US. That's not the only country who participate in atrocity against others. Gory Lv + Immorality Lv + Motive + Atrocity Lv
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    War Crimes In Web Novels

    So the question is: Is the kind of crimes you know from paper or the ones that public don't know about?
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