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    Free Story Criticisms

    Thanks for the review. Hum hum so that's what people think of those books. Alright, Ai-chan will go have a look again. EDIT: Well, Ai-chan reread the section you mentioned and while Ai-chan thanks you for the honest review, Ai-chan won't change it. Carl was indeed a kind of pervert who desired...
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    Recommendations Time loop or time travel

    Oh she's not OP. She was granted ice magic, yet she doesn't have the mana to use it properly and she keeps her memory of the future, but that's it. Even her memory of the future would soon become unreliable because her actions caused a butterfly effect. Though yeah, it's not a time loop story...
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    Free Story Criticisms

    Shamelys Ultima, Ai-chan is scared but would you roast Ai-chan's The Hounds of Hell and Age of Gods Online? Ai-chan heart is not ready, but Ai-chan will read your roast with one eye open! https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2496/age-of-gods-online/...
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    Recommendations Time loop or time travel

    Psst! Ai-chan's Seven Years of Hope (link in signature) has time travel as it's main plot point. The protagonist Selenia came from a doomed world with no hope for victory. Her attendant accidentally met The Anchor of the World and sacrificed his existence to send Selenia 7 years in the past...
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    How do I write a silent fighting scene?

    Instead of: You could do:
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    Getting adaptation

    Adapting a novel into manga is an extremely expensive process. Freelance illustrators would charge around USD50-70 per page. PER PAGE!!! You could probably get a discount for bulk purchase and less panels, but if your manga has 10 pages, that's USSD500 per chapter! Unless you're making money...
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    Novel Suggestion: I Became the Little Sister of a Hero, so What?

    No need to delete it. It was moved to the correct section yesterday.
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    Writing Prompt You found yourself reincarnated in an ancient southeast asian tribe

    That depends. If this is far in the past before the invention of gunpowder, Ai-chan will have all kinds of options, such as being the defender of animism and the concept of god-emperors. Probably would promote conservation culture instead of consumption culture, though that tends to make a...
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    What do authors need and want?

    This thread is the same as this thread. https://forum.scribblehub.com/threads/develop-a-better-free-writing-tool.4054/#post-105505 The questions have nothing to do with students wanting to provide a writer's tool and sounds more like Qidian's usual trolling to improve Webnovel website.
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    Novel Suggestion: I Became the Little Sister of a Hero, so What?

    Wrong section. This is for discussion and tips regarding the act of writing. Not for story request. This should be in Writing Prompts.
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    (Suggestions) Should I turn My Non-Human Novel into a harem novel on the side?

    None of us have the right to say what you should or shouldn't do with your own story. Anyway, Vending Machine In Another World is too similar to a Japanese novel, already been translated on Novelupdates for the past 5 years. With that title, you're gonna get a lot of accusations of plagiarism...
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    I need help with my Hero Classes

    The general classification that most adventure type RPG games follow are: warrior, rogue (not rouge, rouge means the colour red) and magician. Under warrior, there may be additional types: Swordsman (a general term for melee only class) Crusader (usually portrayed as extremely heavily...
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    Post no longer needed how do I remove it

    If you would post snippets of you book and ask for feedback, Ai-chan would probably be able to offer some help. Unfortunately, Ai-chan can't volunteer to read 66k words draft for free, especially considering that Ai-chan doesn't know if the story would fit Ai-chan's preference.
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    How do you write a story with this premise?

    There's a movie where your genitals actually rot from having sex and there was this one girl who gave everyone the disease because she didn't want to be the only one to suffer it or something. Ai-chan could've missed a few key plot point since Ai-chan only watch like the review of it instead of...
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    Do you ever post the rough draft by mistake?

    Yes, Ai-chan used to have a very bad file management. It was not uncommon for Ai-chan to accidentally pick an older file simply because the file was titled 'story of my life beastmen edition chapter 5 revision 6' and windows 7 only showed the title up to 'story of my life'.
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    Have any of you heard of web novel? cause All i hear is RR and SH

    Amazon does not steal content. They couldn't care less about some nonames posting amateur stories on the net. You do actually have to use your real name. You need to write your tax statements and declaration of consent. Those are legal documents which require your real name or it becomes...
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    regarding cultural festivals in animes and mangas

    The way we did it back in school, we have a curtain separating the 'kitchen' and the rest of the classroom. Different with mangas and animes, we did not actually cook in the classroom, as the use of fire in the classroom would be against school rules. The people assigned to 'the kitchen' only...
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    Is my use of third person good or bad?

    It will be very hard to switch to third person if you have started the story on 1st person. They use two different writing styles that do not always mix together and could only cause confusion to you, the author. Even established authors would caution against using both in the same book...
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    Writing Should i make a new faction or a new character to propel the plot?

    Be careful of adding new elements to your story. Don't be like shianshia where instead of resolving plot holes, the author put even more plot holes by introducing new people only to be completely forgotten 5 chapters later. Be careful of adding new characters that only carries the protagonist...
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    (Poll) Coffee vs Tea

    Coffee. It does the hair awesome! No seriously, it makes your hair grow faster. In men, it blocks the hormone that causes male-pattern baldness. In women it makes hair grow faster than usual. So the dream of becoming Rapunzel is achievable if you drink coffee. Rapunzel was probably fed coffee.
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