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Hello, I was wondering if my if my newest chapter makes sense. I finished it and posted it, yet, I felt that something was off. Is there anything wrong with it? My instinct tells me yes, but I have re read it 20 or more times and find no problems. What I think is wrong, is character motivation...

In a dream you hear the heavens denounce you. You wake up from a nap to thunder. Water is leaking through your roof. You look out your window only to see that a tornado is about to touch down. What do you do? What happens next?