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  1. Eryxoo

    [CLOSED]Need honest feedback on my story (not sugar-coated)

    I understand criticism about writing style, and I’m here to improve, so that part is fine. Just to clarify, I’m 16 and English isn’t my native language. I write the story in my own way that I’m comfortable with first, then use AI only to help polish the language and make it readable. The ideas...
  2. Eryxoo

    [CLOSED]Need honest feedback on my story (not sugar-coated)

    Hello everyone, I've read all your replies and thanks for the feedbacks you've provided, and it looked like I really did need some serious feedback, (especially the pacing one, i thought if i write on details itll be good but it turns out it just drags the pacing and makes it slow) so thanks all...
  3. Eryxoo

    [CLOSED]Need honest feedback on my story (not sugar-coated)

    hey, I’ve been writing a story called Her Last Rain it’s more slow and emotional, not really action or anything, and I’m kinda worried it might be too slow or boring if anyone has time to check it out, can you tell me honestly what you think? like - where does it get boring (if it does) - do...
  4. Eryxoo

    Low attention span reviews and ratings [Open]

    Here's mine, Her Last Rain this is my first novel so I don't know that much about writing, anyway I'll appreciate any feedbacks you might have :) Have a good day...
  5. Eryxoo

    What type of literature inspires your writing?

    Hmm, I think what inspires me most are stories that mix warmth with something fragile underneath. Where characters learn to care about each other slowly… even when they know it might not last. A lot of that feeling came from animes like Atri: My Dear Moments, Plastic Memories, Guilty Crown...
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