Tempokai

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  Tempokai

• Jul 6, 2025

Wrote what I thought about pacing:

Pacing questions for everyone.

Pacing in storytelling is defined as "the speed or tempo at which a story unfolds". As readers, we all can see when the story stalls or goes too fast according to our guts. But, as writers, we can't seemingly find out why reader A said it was "glacial" and reader B says it's"perfectly paced"...

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  Tempokai

• Jul 2, 2025

Plot questions for everyone.

I really love stories that focus on the characters.

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Wrote what I thought about "character-driven" anf "plot-driven" stories. I'm exhausted.

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  RepresentingWrath

• Jun 30, 2025

Can't see the thing you posted.

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• Deleted member 84247

• Jun 23, 2025

I know you probably already know this, but you have to ignore bad faith actors when they respond. They are acting from bad faith to begin with so will take everything you say with bad faith. There is no off ramp for them, and they will continue driving the same point home until it's beaten to death.

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  RepresentingWrath

• Jun 22, 2025

Second-to-last roast goes hard.

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  Tempokai

• Jun 18, 2025

I wrote the thing explaining the CCC:

Context, character, content questions for everyone

In my roast thread, I am always ranting about good opening chapters having good ratio of sequential "context, character, content" going on in them. The part I forgot to ask about is, what do you think those three words mean? I'm genuinely never asked anyone about this. So: 1. What is context...

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Please clap, I mean read it while I'm recovering from overthinking fatigue.

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  AYM

• Jun 10, 2025

Is this what you look like when someone submits the butler

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  JayMark

• Jun 4, 2025

Moo

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  Tempokai

• Jun 3, 2025

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  Assurbanipal_II

• May 30, 2025

Much luckies you and your comrades on your crusade against the ebil fanfcis~

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  Tempokai

• May 24, 2025

I'm tired. Work sucked all my creative juices. Who knew making the exact 3D piece into a 2D plane so I could cut it would be hard. I didn't have energy to roast because the difficult work roasted me lmao

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• Deleted member 84247

• May 22, 2025

Your aura became cuter.

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  JayMark

• May 22, 2025

Something's different...
Something's... not the same.

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  Tempokai

• May 17, 2025

It was a long week of working creatively, doing everything besides writing fiction. Can't wait to do nothing tomorrow lol

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  Tempokai

• Apr 27, 2025

https://www.udio.com/songs/a4ZZGrkfHMZfs5Lztc2Q3p

Sounds cool. 9/10

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  RepresentingWrath

• Apr 26, 2025

Browsing through WN I saw a comment saying it is translation. There was no source though. Maybe it is original, but I highly doubt it.

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  Tempokai

• Apr 26, 2025

I've added another batch of translated stories @Corty @RepresentingWrath, but it got merged. Check them out

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  Tempokai

• Apr 24, 2025

I lost my momentum in finding the fanfics. Everyone who's reading this @Corty @RepresentingWrath please report them in the megathread.

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  Corty

• Apr 24, 2025

Will you make a translation hunting megathread, or should we make one?

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  Enjen

• Apr 23, 2025

I'm really enjoying reading your harsh and honest critiques. It gives me perspective and reminds me to analyze as I write.