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Read the Prologue.

I like it.

I want to aim for ~500+ words a day.

Thank you! Is there anything that you like, dislike, and anything that was confusing?

Not dislike just... because I save all my writing on G-doc and do all my editing there. So I keep trying to edit it to how I narrate things. Its not good or bad just how I think....

e.g.
It is a bit lonely now that my parents have passed
that is a statement and explanation
In my head I keep changing it
"It is a bit lonely now... now that my parents have passed"
"It is a bit lonely, now that my parents-"

The fact that I am trying to match the cadence of my voice show that I like the story you are telling I think... or how its opening.