But The writing sucks with most of the story being an infodump and a summary of the simulations and the pacing is wack.
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Doctah_Quack
Tsuru
Before i accepted history as it is like any normal people,
but now?
I find VERY VERY strange, that China sided with America/France/Russia for "liberty" and fighting nazism
and JP was allies with Nazis.
Why ? Bc nowadays China seems very......well you know. Some people disappearing etc.
but now?
I find VERY VERY strange, that China sided with America/France/Russia for "liberty" and fighting nazism
and JP was allies with Nazis.
Why ? Bc nowadays China seems very......well you know. Some people disappearing etc.
Tsuru
What i mean, is : shouldnt JP/China being reversed or something ?
Did the 2 took the wrong camp designation or something ? lolol
Its like Shaolin Soccer with the joke : your goal post is the other side. not here.
Did the 2 took the wrong camp designation or something ? lolol
Its like Shaolin Soccer with the joke : your goal post is the other side. not here.
Tsuru
Back to main post topic :
Also lot of faloo stories suck bc of pacing. They dont write like the MC is alive but more like narrator is a god and MC is a chesspiece. So you get a feeling of overview + timeskips.
Like bruh, why the 3 months skip ? TON OF THINGS is do-able.
Sometimes it is a skill to make info dump being interesting.
Also lot of faloo stories suck bc of pacing. They dont write like the MC is alive but more like narrator is a god and MC is a chesspiece. So you get a feeling of overview + timeskips.
Like bruh, why the 3 months skip ? TON OF THINGS is do-able.
Doctah_Quack
Yeah the pacing and tension at the start of most stories are good but then they go downhill especially in the wuxia genre
Doctah_Quack
@Tsuru Also you forget that the pre nuked japan was kinda wack